Sketching
Feelings nibbling on feelings
Thoughts playing tug of war
Whispers frothing in my head
Blur the lines etched on my palms
I tread, sketching my fate
Walking slow, living fast
Usurping dreams, vanquishing fear
Leaving footprints on the land spread vast
posted by Juhi Dua at 3:40 AM
4 Comments:
excellent..you start with the phenomenons inside to the noumenons outside. Quite a talent. Am bemused every time i read you.
keep going..this seem to be quite instatiable..
Have a gr8 day..
5:55 AM
hmm I thought am reading between the lines..but looks like have not..youve posted this a post b4... apologies for being blinded by the exquisite works that take the top of your page..
Walking slow, living fast
makes sense to me now....perfect state of a zombie
5:59 AM
Thoughts playing tug of war
Walking slow, living fast
Thought-provoking lines. ^_^ The wisdom here is one that any person can relate to. Thank you for sharing. ^_^
8:24 PM
lol... yeah i actually posted it with a wrong date first by mistake, then corrected it but forgot to delete the repeteive posting. zombiness at its best.
1:09 AM
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